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Tears flow down,
I choke and cough,
Leaving you now,
It's harder then I thought.

Please just leave,
   Do not make this difficult,
No more will I be your Juliet,
I fall down sillhouette,
But you my darling,
  I won't forget.
©2008-2009 ~kagome4life
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Author's Comments

I really like this one.
I think I can do better... Maybe.. But I used I believe, a word I have not used in a poem before,
" Sillhouette "

Yes, I believe I havn't. Heh, I just notice these things ^^;
It's deprived out of bordem, such a side effect, Lol.

Comment lovelyss~~!!!!

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:icontomtom1691:
koolness can i ask if the inspiration is from experience?

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"here we have a classic example of misdirected rage. i beleive the technical term is called being an ass." - shigure sohma.
:iconkagome4life:
in a way.

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